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Some brother bonding. I really like this scene. I'm glad I decided to add it into the story. Hehe, Marlowe, you are such an adorable troll.

Many of you were expecting Matthew's wife to finally appear... NOPE! Marlowe was talking about his mate and future Sibelius' mom, a random female chatot that is owned by someone who is visiting Jenna at the moment... Who could that be? And those still waiting for Matthew's wife. Don't worry. We are getting REALLY close.

But man, Elizabeth is not having the best night.

And some serious talk... I am aware of a SERIOUS plot hole I have created here. Remember "riolu is born" comic's end? There, Sibelius' egg already existed while Matthew and Elizabeth were still a murkrow and a combee....

Yeah, THIS IS WHY I AM STILL WRITING DOWN BLACK ON WHITE'S SCRIPT! Don't want stuff like this to happen... I plan to go and fix that page soon and remove Scratch and Sibelius' eggs from the scene...

Also, I changed the font size from 14 to 12. Tell me if it is too small.

Random Doom (c) me
Pokemon (c) Nintendo