Hey! We are back to uploading new bios! Here is Elizabeth's!
As you can read, her new history slightly changes one scene in the Dear Departed story. I plan to go back and edit the text so it works with this. yes, this means Zorro is now wild. I plan to make many of the old minor characters wild (aka, mostly the everstone club members). It always bothered me a little that Elisa had so many pokemon that really served no big purpose... But more of that later!
I hope I didn't forget anything from the text... And only our ghost buddies are left!
And a question for you guys, How do you think "attack order" works? Does a vespiquen summon combees or just bee looking creatures? And are they real or some sort of energy? I'd love to hear your thoughts. The move was just too cool to pass so I had to give it to her.
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I love it, especially the name Elizabeth as in Queen Elizabeth.
I can't believe it took me so long to notice!
I think that its a form of energy that either takes the form of bees or Combees.
I've always assumed Attack Order or Healing Order were just bee-like creatures or energy in the shape of little Combees. X3
Well, given this story it's no wonder she's this grumpy.
yeah me to T_T
*pats fire off of pants*
a real bitch isn't it?
Now that you mention it, I remember in the show that Attack Order came out of the combs on her bottom (hehe). If the attack worked like that, I think it'd be neat if Attack order summoned energy bees that kind of scratch and sting and kamikazee on impact with the enemy.
Really wish I had thought of that before I drew my sad attempt at a Vespiqueen's Attack Order attack
I'd have to say that Attack Order would look better as a bunch of dots of energy swarming together like bees. A bunch of combees would look big and rather intrusive considering the size of Combees. I think they would block out a large area in a drawing and would look awkward while chasing someone considering how blocky (hexagonal-y?) they are. If they were actual bees I think it would be kind of weird... lol
Oh and Rupert was also mentioned in this bio. I think you should put the link down here considering that you put Matthew's.
I see you've already fixed many typos other people have pointed out, so I have only one left to point out: "She did her best to survive and with her skills and spent most of her time hiding or making sweet honey" - I think there's one too many "and" there. You can remove either one, it won't make much of a difference, but if I were you, I'd remove the second "and".
Oh, and this was already pointed out, but you didn't fix it yet: "Elizabeth tried to stop him but in no avail" - it should be TO no avail.