RGB [bio coming]
Here we have it folks! Danny the
The biggest change you see and I feel I need to address is the fact that yes... Danny is now a wild pokemon (and Merry will be too). It really felt wrong and awkward to tie him to Elisa and I felt being captured really limited the possibilities I could do with these two. Now that they are wild, they can go as they please and do whatever they want. But like I mentioned in the bio, they still live at the ranch so technically nothing has changed.
Sigh, tho this means some of the old dialog no longer makes sense which means I need to go and change those too... Man you who translate RD must hate me.
Oh boy! Only Merry is left!
Danny & Random Doom © me
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I personally hear his voice in my head as I read Danny's lines.
Speaking off, seeing it's your birthday soon, you can expect a gift art later this week. And once again Danny tries to get past Spooky the Haunter to get that sacred slice of birthday cake. With the newly revealed megaforms I'm trying to find a way to incorperate that in the gift art...
He reminds me of Stitch From Lilo and Stitch.
And yeah, it's a habit of mine.
I guess I was wrong...
I also knew that you'd choose Kadabra as Danny's previous mortal form. That one wasn't hard to figure out. However, him being a trained criminal Pokémon before he and his master were killed by the police... That I didn't see coming. I must assume that Danny didn't know Teleport as Kadabra, because otherwise he and his master could have escaped ridiculously easily.
Danny having a Naughty nature makes perfect sense. His moveset could be better, but since he is wild and presumably doesn't battle a lot unless he has to, I can totally understand his move choices. You even explained two of them in the bio.
Clyde and Bonnie also being wild is perfectly acceptable. I don't think we've ever even seen them in the old canon main series comics, so I can't really miss them. I love them being Danny's adoptive parents, but I wonder, is Danny grateful to them for saving him and raising him? Does he love them? You've made it pretty clear that Danny is pretty much a total jackass without any sort of morals or concern for others, but I'd find it hard to believe if you told me that Danny doesn't care about his adoptive parents at all. Just like TvTropes say, Even Bad Men Love Their Mamas. ...Or at least they should.
I can't wait to learn more about RGB and the ghost house. I'm looking forward to Merry and RGB's bios and, of course, any future comics that might bring up the ghosts' mysterious residence in the forest near Lake Verity.
Finally, the typos I spotted (I know that some of these have already been pointed out, but still):
- and he had a couple of gems on his back.
- So, he started to wander off, despite the Dusknoir's warnings.
- Danny's life changed when he met a new ghost. A little Rotom moved into the ghost house
- Danny ignored her at first
- Danny ate the emerald and promised the Rotom they would be partners forever.
- decided to move to a nearby ranch.
- He uses Shadow Sneak to blend into shadows
- He has
And thanks! I'll hope to get all these fixed today.